In the awesome pattern of things you actually secure an A for effort and hard work. Where you actually lost everybody was on all the facts. As it is said, the devil is in the details... And that could not be more accurate in this article. Having said that, let me say to you just what did work. The article (parts of it) is certainly pretty persuasive which is probably why I am making the effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, even though I can certainly see a jumps in reasoning you come up with, I am not really sure of exactly how you seem to connect the details which in turn help to make the actual conclusion. For right now I will subscribe to your issue but wish in the future you actually connect your facts better.